tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post8103322810676588001..comments2024-03-11T02:32:15.295-04:00Comments on Goblin Artisans: Weekend Art Challenge 091115—Wen Juinn PngUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger42125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-74232016435828957032015-09-15T12:32:02.153-04:002015-09-15T12:32:02.153-04:00Crap. Missed this. :(
Crap. Missed this. :(<br />Basshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14796834860620921124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-16164834022060885722015-09-15T09:09:49.823-04:002015-09-15T09:09:49.823-04:00Red gets fight as well. See Pit Fight, Swift Kick,...Red gets fight as well. See Pit Fight, Swift Kick, Alpha Brawl.AlexChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05674122775216494431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-3575316333904160132015-09-15T09:08:42.530-04:002015-09-15T09:08:42.530-04:00Very nice.Very nice.AlexChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05674122775216494431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-57910275241364238772015-09-14T23:07:43.859-04:002015-09-14T23:07:43.859-04:00Renders are up!<a href="http://mondaymorningmaro.blogspot.com/2015/09/ga-weekend-art-challenge-renders-911.html" rel="nofollow"> Renders are up! </a>lpaulsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07772860908442278112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-76206049512673446592015-09-14T18:39:51.492-04:002015-09-14T18:39:51.492-04:00Points Ben. Points!Points Ben. Points!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773403569389449877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-55902287489470406282015-09-14T18:35:04.331-04:002015-09-14T18:35:04.331-04:00This flavor feels more white to me. But I do like ...This flavor feels more white to me. But I do like your inversion quite a bitAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773403569389449877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-62829484367560473982015-09-14T10:57:23.500-04:002015-09-14T10:57:23.500-04:00I was thinking about it. The only problem with it,...I was thinking about it. The only problem with it, is that the ability is in the green color pie. But the art is defintly not greenLompe Luitenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00232072982510783952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-20569781569624618882015-09-14T09:32:36.392-04:002015-09-14T09:32:36.392-04:00Yeah, you're probably right about swinginess, ...Yeah, you're probably right about swinginess, but I worry if the the repetable shock effect does become to easy with "gains/loses 2 life, you may pay 1R, does 2 damage". I don't really know what version would be more powerful.<br />If properly developed, they probably won't retain the 1R activation cost, or maybe they need to cost more than 2 mana for a 2/2 and 4 mana for a 3/3.<br />Anyway, updated versions:<br /><br />Firejustice Samurai RW<br />Creature - Human Samurai (U)<br />Whenever a player gains 2 or more life, you may pay 1R. If you do, CARDNAME deals 2 damage to target creature.<br />2/2<br /><br />Firepain Oni 2BR<br />Creature - Demon Spirit (U)<br />Whenever a player loses 2 or more life, you may pay 1R. If you do, CARDNAME deals 2 damage to target creature.<br />3/3<br /><br />I'd like the arts to be zoomed in on the creatures, thanks.P for Pizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05000340281390449308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-28379694696401707742015-09-14T05:01:11.507-04:002015-09-14T05:01:11.507-04:00Doh, thank you. I'll try to think of another n...Doh, thank you. I'll try to think of another name although I don't know if I'll manage it.<br /><br />Maybe the flavour is a bit tenuous. Art B looks to depict extra arms suddenly growing out of the demon (comments on the artist's deviant art pointed it out), so the idea is, extra arms, but they're painful to grow, but they let you carry twice as much stuff.<br /><br />And moment of death is supposed to be something like someone freezing with fear and being finished off, or your life flashing before your eyes. Except that was clearer before I had to add the damage as well.<br /><br />*shrug* If it doesn't work, that's ok.Jack (cartesiandaemon)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08258267965242039995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-87939717661167076952015-09-14T04:57:50.521-04:002015-09-14T04:57:50.521-04:00Or maybe make them both demon soldiers, but one fi...Or maybe make them both demon soldiers, but one fight a creature you don't control and the other fight a creature you control? That's a stretch on the flavour, but makes the cards more interestingly different with only one word change.Jack (cartesiandaemon)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08258267965242039995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-43950077830386179622015-09-13T21:08:37.705-04:002015-09-13T21:08:37.705-04:00Just a note that the name Extra Arms is taken alre...Just a note that the name <a href="http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=43595" rel="nofollow">Extra Arms</a> is taken already.<br /><br />I'm not quite sure I get the flavor of either of these to be honest. Clarification?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11393054869276886509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-80431511664100829962015-09-13T19:56:45.540-04:002015-09-13T19:56:45.540-04:00I'll do the renders this week. That should be ...I'll do the renders this week. That should be fun...lpaulsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07772860908442278112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-50584787047291490412015-09-13T19:53:22.594-04:002015-09-13T19:53:22.594-04:00Proposed new version, now with more cutesy mana nu...Proposed new version, now with more cutesy mana numbers:<br /><br />Sound 1RR<br />Sorcery- Uncommon<br />Art B<br />Each creature you control gets +1/+0 until end of turn. CARDNAME deals 1 damage to each creature you don't control.<br />//<br />Fury 3R<br />Sorcery- Uncommon<br />Art A<br />Target creature you control gets +3/+0 until end of turn. CARDNAME deals 3 damage to target creature you don't control.<br /><br />This is probably more in line with split-card mana costs anyway.lpaulsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07772860908442278112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-80005143996400047302015-09-13T19:48:20.541-04:002015-09-13T19:48:20.541-04:00Should this have Fuse? I suspect not-- it's co...Should this have Fuse? I suspect not-- it's complicated enough as it stands and there's no real synergy between the two halves.<br /><br />I just noticed that you'll want to cast Sound post-combat a large portion of the time, which is kind of awkward. Maybe it should say "each creature you control" for symmetry? In that case it should probably cost 2R as well. Or maybe one of these should cost 1RR to avoid an exact cost match... but at that point I'm just manipulating things to justify a split card.lpaulsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07772860908442278112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-31868456739904587962015-09-13T17:58:53.087-04:002015-09-13T17:58:53.087-04:00Moment of Death
Sorcery
Art A
5UR
Target player dr...Moment of Death<br />Sorcery<br />Art A<br />5UR<br />Target player draws a card for each card in their graveyard. ~ deals 1 damage to them for each card drawn this way.<br /><br />Extra Arms<br />Sorcery<br />Art B<br />3UR<br />Target player draws a card for each card in their hand. ~ deals 1 damage to them for each card drawn this way.Jack (cartesiandaemon)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08258267965242039995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-82012755489648626912015-09-13T14:14:33.725-04:002015-09-13T14:14:33.725-04:00Cool name for this mechanic! Props :)
I can see t...Cool name for this mechanic! Props :)<br /><br />I can see this printed as is or with a mana cost of 1RR or 1URAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773403569389449877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-75257221033518760692015-09-13T13:54:48.352-04:002015-09-13T13:54:48.352-04:00Thank you ipaulsen :)
Also, I'd like to chang...Thank you ipaulsen :)<br /><br />Also, I'd like to change this to uncommon.<br /><br />If the mechanic is deemed to be too fiddly, I wouldn't be surprised or upset to change the transformation variables, but that's a development issue. I'm a sucker for aesthetics :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773403569389449877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-49975553808815694672015-09-13T13:18:51.407-04:002015-09-13T13:18:51.407-04:00Nope, no punchline. Just supposed to be two badass...Nope, no punchline. Just supposed to be two badass flavortexts, and I thought it'd be neat to do those one word away instead of the rules text.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11393054869276886509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-81897448574863577582015-09-13T03:15:19.564-04:002015-09-13T03:15:19.564-04:00I really like the choice of "gains / loses&qu...I really like the choice of "gains / loses" as the switched word and how you conveyed the transition with colors / art.<br /><br />Have you considered changing the 3s in the first text box to 2s? I feel that would be a bit more aesthetically pleasing (and less swingy).<br /><br />Regardless, my inner Johnny immediately started searching for cards that would go well with Firejustice Samurai. I think the prize goes to Scourge of the Nobilis.lpaulsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07772860908442278112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-58000950627900640242015-09-13T01:23:00.960-04:002015-09-13T01:23:00.960-04:00I like the idea of Tarkir-esque reprints with clos...I like the idea of Tarkir-esque reprints with close, but not identical flavor. What are you going for with the flavor text? Is it purely a slave to the challenge requirements, or is there some clever punchline from the juxtaposition of the two that I'm not seeing?Jenesishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05356037137564501914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-61872475608432964252015-09-12T21:33:00.604-04:002015-09-12T21:33:00.604-04:00Reprint:
Screaming Fury 2R
Art A OR Art B
Sorcery...Reprint:<br /><br />Screaming Fury 2R<br />Art A OR Art B<br />Sorcery (U)<br />Target creature gets +5/+0 and gains haste until end of turn.<br /><br />Flavortext for Art A:<br /><i>Once set on the warpath, a Bloodrager is only satisfied when an enemy's shrieks match their own - and then fall silent.</i><br /><br />Flavortext for Art B:<br /><i>Once set on the warpath, a demon is only satisfied when an enemy's shrieks match their own - and then fall silent.</i><br /><br />Feedback appreciated as always.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11393054869276886509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-87320781456081263972015-09-12T18:43:41.373-04:002015-09-12T18:43:41.373-04:00B/R(hybrid), Treacherous Reinforcements
Sorcery (U...B/R(hybrid), Treacherous Reinforcements<br />Sorcery (U)<br />Put a 2/2 human token on the battlefield. It fights target another creature you control<br /><br />Even a fool in a desperate situation would not make a deal with the Ronin<br /><br />1BR Treacherous Demon<br />Sorcery (R)<br />put a 5/5 demon token on the battlefield. It fights another target creature you control<br /><br />Even a fool in a desperate situation would not make a deal with the OniLompe Luitenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00232072982510783952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-33193760197317777842015-09-12T15:16:42.074-04:002015-09-12T15:16:42.074-04:00I came up with a perfect split-card name and didn&...I came up with a perfect split-card name and didn't want to see it go to waste, so:<br /><br />Sound 1R<br />Sorcery- Uncommon<br />Art B<br />Target creature you control gets +1/+0 until end of turn. CARDNAME deals 1 damage to each creature you don't control.<br />//<br />Fury 2R<br />Sorcery- Uncommon<br />Art A<br />Target creature you control gets +3/+0 until end of turn. CARDNAME deals 3 damage to target creature you don't control.lpaulsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07772860908442278112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-34605714917745211382015-09-12T12:04:07.401-04:002015-09-12T12:04:07.401-04:00"Another" creature you control? Or are y..."Another" creature you control? Or are you going or the seppuku flavor?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773403569389449877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5479847193762153273.post-68820929243276414062015-09-12T10:25:35.338-04:002015-09-12T10:25:35.338-04:00Seems fine.Seems fine.Jay Treathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09428861685923241850noreply@blogger.com